PMD - The Outsider

PMD - The Outsider : Page 2

Date Posted: July 13th, 2017, 6:37 am
wooo new charaters

Author Notes

Here the second page ! Hope you like it ! You can still give me some advice and other stuff i'm here to improve.
For the little information : Huss and Boogly are in a complicated relationship, Huss don't really like him but Boogly try to be friendly toward Huss. That's why Adèle say that's a weird situation.

If you don't understand my way of writing, here the script :
"What a beautiful new day !"
"Hey Adèle !"
"What's going on here ?"
"You don't know ? They found someone in the sea last night."
"*cough cough*"
"Hi Boogly"
"Oh hi Huss..."
"This is weird"

Comments

@BooglyMeowth:
It looks like you got a pen or sharpie or something to outline the characters - that's freat, because it makes them stand out a whole lot more!
I actually like the second page more than the first one - the paneling's easier to understand and everything's much more smoother
Though Boogly in panel 5 - his legs are a bit... off. I don't know, even though they're anatomically correct
Anyway, good page :3
@WildfireK: I found a pen in my room because the other were dying but in a few day I will get some new stuff like a say yesterday but thanks ! :D Yeah I know the legs are weird I fucked up because I was really tired it's was the night in my country so I didn't pay attention to what I was doing I tried to fix it but that look worst xD
And thanks ! :D
I love your art style! This looks good!
@ShadowStalker1128: Thank you ! I'm glad you like it :D